Wednesday, 22 June 2016

Thursday, 2 June 2016

Short shorts no no

Short shorts no no
Reported by: Kartell
19-05-16


During the holidays Thomas Takimoana,his cousin, sister, step brother and niece went to the Kawakawa pool at the Bay Of Islands  Recreation  centre.

While they were swimming a gentleman in very short shorts came out of the changing rooms . Thomas and his family found this very amusing. They started laughed at him, he turned and stared at them.   They got nervous and swam away.


Thomas said he learnt a very important lesson. This was,  not to ever wear short shorts in a public place or to the pools .


Olympic swimming pool andWater polo at Robinson Pool


I was learning to write a report about my buddy’s holliday. We had to do Who they were with What they did Where they went. Then Whaea Chrissy and I had to organise them into paragraphs. So it would make sense. I also had to think of a headline to hook the reader in.
I think i learnt a lot about reports I really like the title name Short Short No No the funny bit is when the Gentleman in very short shorts comes out

Wednesday, 1 June 2016

Stacey Jones Boigraphy By: Aliyah

                 Stacey Jones
          Some Quick facts about Stacey Jones
  • Born: 1976
  • Grew up: Auckland
  • Schools: St paul’s college
  • Family: Married to Rachelle; one Daughter, Chellcey
  • Claim to fame: Outstanded rugby league player,both for the Auckland warriors and the kiwis
  • Born and raised in Auckland, and happily settled there with his wife and Daughter.
  • Stacey Jones was playing for the Junior kiwis and the Auckland
Stacey Jones played rugby league when he play he finds gaps that most of us can't even see, he’s very quick, very powerful and highly skilled. But boy is he modest.
Stacey Jones was in born in 1976. He grew up in Auckland. Stacey Jones has a family, his wife's name is Rachelle and only daughter is Chellcey. Stacey Jones loved playing rugby his favourite part of the game was tackling. When he had the ball he loved to run through gaps. He got 120,000 dollars every 12 hours he played in Greymouth and in Auckland.  
This is some photos of Stacey jones.
Image result for stacey jones
  1. What you were doing or Walt Writing.
A Biography story about Stacey Jones


  1. What you think you did well.
I think I did it well I search up facts about Stacey jones


  1. What you think you could do better next time.
Read thought the book and find more information


  1. Make sure it is your best work.
I tried to read through the hole book but I took too long.

Jordon's Biography

Ann Makosinski


How would you like a flashlight that turns on by the heat off the body temperature.  


What do you want to make next.


What are you future goals.
Your future goals are to make the world a better places.


British columbia's Ann Makosinski is a young inventor who was able to invent a flashlight that turns on by the heat of a human hand alone while she was still in high school. She was born in October 3, 1997 (age 16 years) She went to high school at Michael’s University school.


She used peltier tiles for the thermoelectric component one side is very cold and the other side is very hot that is how the flashlight works. But when one side is heated and the other feels cool ambient air, electricity is conducted and the flashlight was able to function perfectly without batteries.


Then after you made the flashlight you went and made a E drink that can charge your phone by holding a cup. Then you want to help the plant by making new things and some inventions that can help the environment.


REPORT CHECKLIST - SELF ASSESSMENT
My work has a title.
 ✓
I have introduced my topic with a general statement.
 ✓
I have a new paragraph for each different set of facts.
 ✓
I have written these facts in my own words (not a copy and paste, this is called plagiarism)
 ✓
I have used language that is precise and factual.
 ✓
I have a conclusion ending.
 ✓
I have checked my work for spelling mistakes.
 ✓
I have used capital letters, full stops, commas and other punctuation where it is needed.
 ✓
I am satisfied that my work makes sense.
 ✓
I am proud of my writing.
 ✓
My reflection
 


REPORT CHECKLIST - PEER ASSESSMENT
Your work has a title.
You have introduced my topic with a general statement.
You  have a new paragraph for each different set of facts.
You have written these facts in my own words (not a copy and paste, this is called plagiarism)
You  have used language that is precise and factual.
You  have a conclusion ending.

You  have checked my work for spelling mistakes.
You  have used capital letters, full stops, commas and other punctuation where it is needed.
Your work makes sense.
Peer Comment


This writing has been self and peer assessed there may still be errors.

Alazhays Biography

Louis Braille
Have you ever wondered how blind learn the alphabet.
Who is Louis Braille
Louis Braille is a blind person who invented a way to learn alphabets using upraised dots in different series.
When was he born
He was born in Coupvray, France and born in 1809.
What he does for a job
At Nineteen years old he became a Full - time teacher at a Royal Institute for blind in Paris.

How he was blinded
He at the age of 3 had an eye injury which left him blind until the age of 43 he died.



REPORT CHECKLIST - SELF ASSESSMENT
My work has a title.
Yes
I have introduced my topic with a general statement.
Yes
I have a new paragraph for each different set of facts.
Yes
I have written these facts in my own words (not a copy and paste, this is called plagiarism
Yes
I have used language that is precise and factual.
Yes
I have a conclusion ending.

I have checked my work for spelling mistakes.
Yes
I have used capital letters, full stops, commas and other punctuation where it is needed.
Yes
I am satisfied that my work makes sense.
Yes
I am proud of my writing.
Yes
My reflection



REPORT CHECKLIST - PEER ASSESSMENT
Your work has a title.
Yes
You have introduced my topic with a general statement.
Yes
You  have a new paragraph for each different set of facts.
Yes
You have written these facts in my own words (not a copy and paste, this is called plagiarism)
Yes
You  have used language that is precise and factual.
Yes
You  have a conclusion ending.

You  have checked my work for spelling mistakes.
Yes
You  have used capital letters, full stops, commas and other punctuation where it is needed.
Yes
Your work makes sense.
Yes
Peer Comment

Biography By Thomas

By: Thomas Ann Makosinski- who changed the world. Ever wanted to change the world by inventing a flashlight that runs on the heat of the human hand alone? British columbia's Ann Makosinski was able to invent a flashlight that runs purely without batteries. She was Born in October 3rd 1997 in victoria, Canada. She is now 18 years old. She also goes to St. michaels university. Her interests are science and insects. She invented it in 2013 on December the 23rd and when she was 16 She invented the hollow flashlight. She was on the tonight show twice with Jimmy Fallon. She also invented the e-drink on the 14th of April 2015.. Ann Makosinski is a good and inspirational person to study about. Especially if you need to study Science and Insects. She has an amazing life. My reflection: WALT: I was learning to structure a biography What I did well: What I think I did well is that I was the last one to start my biography and I finished early. What I could Do better next time: I could just start on biography instead of starting video notes over and over again. Brad helped me fix up my mistakes that I had for my biography.. Thank you brad. REPORT CHECKLIST - SELF ASSESSMENT My work has a title. Yes I have introduced my topic with a general statement. Yes I have a new paragraph for each different set of facts. Yes I have written these facts in my own words (not a copy and paste, this is called plagiarism) Yes I have used language that is precise and factual. yes I have a conclusion ending. Yes I have checked my work for spelling mistakes. Yes I have used capital letters, full stops, commas and other punctuation where it is needed. yes I am satisfied that my work makes sense. Yes I am proud of my writing. Yes My reflection yes